4.4 — “Suddenly Human”

4.4 — “Suddenly Human”

Plot: Responding to a distress call from a Talarian vessel, the Enterprise rescues a human teenager who has been raised by Talarians ever since being taken prisoner as a youth following the destruction of his colony and the murder of his parents. The boy thinks he is Talarian, and wants to return to their society. Should Picard let him go, or return him to Starfleet?

Thoughts: A run of good episodes at the start of Season Four continues here. There are a few points, however, which make this entry a step below the top tier for me.

First, there is some fudging around the circumstances of Jono/Jeremiah’s abduction (or rescue?) from the destroyed colony. Was the “Galen Border Conflict” based on some kind of legitimate territorial dispute, or was this just a basic pillaging/war crime situation? Sometimes the script seems to want to portray Jono as a foundling rescued from a battlefield, and other times as a murder/kidnap victim. There’s a difference.

Is Endar running a criminal piracy operation, or providing a supportive home for wayward youth? Are Jono’s feelings of loyalty the product of brainwashing and systematic abuse, or is Endar a good, loving father, who the crew is quick to misunderstand based on cultural prejudice?

If this were the story of a child raised in a terrorist cell, or kidnapped by the Manson cult or something, and the child was being used to perpetrate more violence, I think most people would agree the authorities should not send him back. If this is more of an innocent Tarzan story, it makes more sense for Jono to return. I feel like the episode wants to move so quickly to a pat ending that it fails to make hard story choices, and thereby lets the characters out of making hard choices as well.

I tend to agree with Picard’s resolution, but even better would be to provide for Jono to have continuing relations with Starfleet and his family after returning to the Talarians, so he can keep a foot in both worlds. He may be old enough to make his own decision, but he’s still awfully young to be making an irrevocable one. There is an opportunity for him to build a bridge between the two cultures.

Another issue is pointed out by Michael Pillar, quoted on Memory Alpha (http://en.memory-alpha.wikia.com/wiki/Suddenly_Human):  “I think that episode was marvelously written by Jeri Taylor and it was strong enough to hire her on staff. I was disappointed by the show primarily because the aliens weren’t alien enough. I felt there was some miscommunication on some level. The whole idea of that show was missed because these savage, different alien type creatures turned out to be very human.”

I initially thought the Talarians were supposed to be Telerites (from “Journey to Babel”), and was confused about what happened to their pig noses.

On another note, I guess it’s easy to forgive someone for stabbing you in the chest when he doesn’t end up doing any harm? Seems like it would have been just as easy for Picard to die instantly, which would have been a whole different kettle of fish. 

Still, this is an interesting story, with good pacing and drama. 3 of 5 Talarian hammocks.

http://en.memory-alpha.wikia.com/wiki/Suddenly_Human


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6 responses to “4.4 — “Suddenly Human””

  1. Randi Cohen Avatar

    I agree, good but not as good as the prior entries this season.  

    It raises more questions than it answers.  

    Shouldn’t this be a matter for a court to decide, for one thing?  Also, Jono seems to have quite a raging case of PTSD and perhaps he could be offered a cure for this?  Or at least have the illness explained to him, for heavens’ sake?

    I also agree that it doesn’t make sense to never visit his relatives on Earth… even if he refuses, he may change his mind later so leaving the door open seems smart.   

    Why is Worf so lacking in eloquence to someone who shares his life story in many ways?

    I do like Picard’s consternation in response to dealing with a teenager, and the final scene between the two is sweet.  

    As far as the solution the episodes arrives at, I’m not so sure about it.  I do think someone should have asked Jono’s opinion alot sooner.  And I also agree with you, Kev, there really isn’t much investigation or elucidation of Jono’s life with Endar.  I would think it would be sensible to at least ask him tons more questions about the Telarian moral system, how he is treated as compared to his “brothers”, how common it is to have these types of injuries, what are the nature of the “games”,etc., etc.  Basically we need the interstellar version of  DCF (or at least that’s what it’s called here in CT) to investigate.

    Even if Troi cannot talk to Endar directly, she could explain to Picard what questions to ask.  Once again, missed opportunity for Troi to do something useful.

  2. Katharine Bond Avatar

    I thought the crew’s initial response to Jono was also incredibly tone deaf. Continually insisting to a traumatized child that their reality is wrong seems, well, wrong to me. And really, the only analogue they have is Stockholm syndrome? There are more apt comparisons out there. Plus, I find it hard to believe that this is the Federation ‘ s first experience with this type of situation.

    That being said, this was a better episode than many from previous seasons.

  3. Kevin Black Avatar

    In WA it’s called CPS (Child Protective Services). Something that interests me (this used to come up occasionally in TOS) is that when you’re out on a ship there isn’t the infrastructure to support a justice system, so you’re forced to use abbreviated court martial and military tribunal-type procedures for adjudication. But the point is well taken that, however the decision gets made, a more thorough inquiry and procedure is badly needed.

  4. R. Alex Reutter Avatar

    Suddenly…

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9DD7VIKZnGA

    Totally agree about the tone def reception of the crew, especially given that Worf was raised by humans (though his human parents acknowledged that he was Klingon and made sure he knew of his people’s culture); still, that keening sound really makes you want to smack him.  

    Picard once again is shoved into creating a relationship with a child.  Slight yawn.

    Good Deanna episode.

    To make you feel more human, there’s nothing like:

    * playing some space-age racquetball to bring on the PTSD

    * throwing a banana split in Wil Wheaton’s face to bond

    * stabbing your captain in the chest

  5. Randi Cohen Avatar

    I know I do those things all the time…

  6. R. Alex Reutter Avatar

    Quick re-reading above comments, I agree w/Randi there are missed opportunities for Troi here.  Overall a good episode for her, though, because her empathy allows us to cut through the initial confusion of dealing with the Talarian teens, and when she’s unable to help Jono, it’s because of the limitations of his adoptive culture, and not because of some artificial limitation the writers have put on her powers or professional expertise.  And she gets to articulate the reasons for allowing Jono and Endar to meet, against the doctor’s concerns for Jono’s safety, while Picard “simply” has to weigh the options.  This feels real.

    There is a weird moment when Picard brings Jono to meet Endar, and Troi and Endar appear to be conferring, heads together, in the conference room, until Picard and Jono arrive, at which point they pull away from each other.  They may have blocked it this way so that the movement of Troi and Endar’s bodies helps to “reveal” the figures of Picard and Jono in the background, but given Talarian culture, I strongly expected Endar’s posture to already be drawn away from Troi.  This is a bad start to an otherwise good scene.

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