3.10 — “The Defector”

3.10 — “The Defector”

Plot: Picard and Data’s revels on the Holodeck are interrupted when a Romulan scout ship races out of the Neutral Zone, demanding asylum, pursued by Romulan warships. The lone Romulan pilot claims to be a defector, with news that the Romulans have plans to establish a base in the Neutral Zone to use as a platform to strike inside Federation space. Picard has little time to decide whether to trust the purported defector and what action to take. The outcomes uncertain, his choice could leave the Federation defenseless against attack… or instigate a war.

Thoughts: Romulans again? I am a bit confused by the geography of the Neutral Zone. I think of it as a huge sector of space. It seems that the Enterprise, however, can scan right across it into Romulan space, and ships can dart in and out of it like the parking lot of a 7-Eleven.

This is the second TNG script from Ronald D. Moore in a short span of episodes (his first was 3.5, “The Bonding”) and the one that resulted in him being hired as a staff writer. It’s a fun one. As a true fan of TOS, Moore remembers that Romulans are at their best playing double agent spy games, as in TOS 3.2,“The Enterprise Incident.” Like the crew, I would not have trusted this defector without great sureties. It’s nice, for once, to see them behave somewhat sensibly, and not just take stupid risks for the sake of the story.

I really like the actor (James Sloyan) who plays Admiral Jarok, especially during his monologue about leaving his daughter. I appreciate that the crew’s desire to maintain peace and abhorrence of war is coupled in this case with a realistic sense of danger and awareness of duty. Unlike the last episode, which had little sense of stakes, I believed that something important was going on, which made me excited to be watching this series. Thank goodness.

The Shakespearean scene at the beginning is from Henry V, Act IV, scene one, depicting (in the words of the play’s chorus) “A little touch of Harry in the night.” The reference to Branagh was a real nod of respect. Kenneth Branagh’s transcendent film version of Henry V, which he directed with himself in the lead role, debuted on November 8, 1989, less than two months before this episode’s original air date of January 1, 1990. Yes, it is still remembered.

How does Data change his clothes so quickly between the clothes he is wearing in the Holodeck and the uniform he is wearing when he sits down on the bridge?

One criticism of this series of Romulan episodes is that I don’t get a sense of the relative strength of the Enterprise’s military capabilities compared to its adversaries. It’s hard to know how nervous to feel for them.

4 of 5 holographic campfires.

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10 responses to “3.10 — “The Defector””

  1. Randi Cohen Avatar

    Touching!

    It seemed obvious as soon as the betrayal was revealed that Admiral Jarok  would kill himself… surprising and annoying that this is the one time that Counselor Troi does not butt in!  (I mean, I think this is good as far as raising the stakes as you point out, Kev, but I just think it makes her usual butting in and presumable counseling skills feel even less legit if she does not attempt to intervene in an actual and obvious psychological crisis).

    I must admit that the Klingon thing caught me by surprise although it shouldn’t have.

    I liked this one.  Interesting to see Picard be such a hard-ass to the Admiral and also to see him stand up to the Romulans in that manner.  I feel like Macbeth from the first two seasons has turned into King Henry V.  It’s about time!

    (BTW, I thought one of the 2 shakespearean holodeck extras sounded like Patrick Stewart, and it turns out that indeed it was Patrick Stewart.  I feel like he was in “full Shakespeare mode” the whole episode actually, and it definitely becomes him.)

  2. Walter Phippeny Avatar

    You make some good points about geography. I know there are star maps that tell you were Vulcan is–the Romulan Empire, and the Klingons, et al–but the show never makes an attempt to bring us into the loop. We hear all about warp engines, and how they work, but never really the layout of the part of the galaxy they’re in, just words like “sector” and “quadrant” thrown around. When Data says something like, “we should be there in 21 minutes”, I always finding myself wondering, “where the hell are you, that you could travel any interstellar distance in 21 minutes? Do the writers know how much distance there is between stars? They probably do, but do they care?”

    Now, this may well be addressed in books, comics, or other forms of appendices, but it’s never touched on in the show. When they start talking about geography, the conversation gets really vague and filled with handwaveium. It seems like a missed opportunity for narrative. If I know how distant different ships are, and I know that they”re attempting to get to particular place, then I can have a classic “chase” or “race” plot. I know what the stakes are now, and can, therefore, be invested in what’s happening.

    And you also make a good point about the Romulans. How big IS the empire? What are their capacities? It’s kind of the same thing with the Klingons. How do we know that Klingons are a warrior race? Because we are told, and at length, that they value honor, struggle, and family. But, for a race of ultimate warriors, they seem to die like punks a lot, and, where they should all be about honor, most story lines involve them fucking each other over, or pulling off some kind of deception. I think the best depiction of Klingons living up to their reputation as a warrior race is in the recent short film “Prelude to Axanar” put out by Star Trek Axanar . Check it out on the youtubes: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1W1_8IV8uhA (running time 21 mintues)

  3. Kevin Black Avatar

    Good point, Walter–21 minutes is like the time it takes to catch a PATH train from Hoboken, not any kind of interstellar travel distance. Although, I wonder what intra-solar system travel times would be if we had access to light speed travel?

    Regarding Klingons, I think the best canonical episode so far to show their capabilities is the very first one, TOS 1.26, “Errand of Mercy,” where the whole army shows up to occupy and colonize the Organians. Kor. That was a Klingon!

  4. Kevin Black Avatar

    We will have to get back to the fan films at some point. The two big series, ST Continues and ST Phase One, both have new episodes, plus there is Axanar and some other stuff like Gods and Men out there we haven’t covered.

  5. Kevin Black Avatar

    Randi, I sometimes feel like the guest actors all commit suicide in these shows because they need to explain why this person isn’t around next week, and suicide always seems like a stronger dramatic choice than putting them on a bus to somewhere. I was really fascinated by this character’s scruples and divided loyalties however. He was betraying the Romulans, but didn’t want to BETRAY them. He wanted to stop them from betraying their own interests! I think it was earned, and I’m not sure Troi could have stopped him, but she should have tried or at least identified the danger (both professionally, and with her Betazed senses, which only seem to be around when dramatically convenient).

  6. Randi Cohen Avatar

    Great point about the Klingons!

  7. Walter Phippeny Avatar

    Kevin Black​ I think that we can all agree that the TOS Klingons are different from TNG Klingons, and actually make a lot more sense. The TOS Klingons are basically Space Nazis: people who live in a totalitarian, police state-like society that developed space travel and are interested in military expansion. The TNG Klingons are changed to be this warrior race, but one that doesn’t have a caste system. We’re always left wondering “who are the janitors in Klingon society? who are the people who don’t do the glorious work of war? And, most importantly, how did these people get to the stars without a mutual destruction event?” Every now and then we see a Klingon scientist show up, or some other situation where this question is lamp-shaded, but I think they missed an opportunity here to give the Klingons more depth. First, maybe honor means doing the tasks which the universe has given you well, bravely in the face of adversity. Instead of the most glorious thing being to die in battle, how about being really good at your chosen career, struggling against external and internal forces. When honor is tied to profession, you get people striving to be the best: a group of people that might develop space travel. You could also make being a warrior less about actual fighting and more about a state of mind, a path to wisdom. Carlos Castaneda anyone? Also, a caste system where the warrior elite are on top would solve some of these nagging questions too. My biggest problem with the Klingons, though, is being told and not shown how they are what they are. Every Klingon is supposed to be a one man army, but then you watch them get their asses handed to them in a fist fight by Riker when the plot demands it.

    To get back to this episode, Kevin Black​ you point out what I love about it! Admiral Jarok is a complex character in a tricky situation. The plot is compelling because we have a patriot who is acting against his country FOR his country. That makes for a great story! The suicide is definitely deserved and makes sense, instead of a dramatic turn for plot convenience. If you discovered that you’ve given up everything only to find out that you’ve been deceived just to see where your loyalties lie? Well, I’d be reaching for the gun too. So, instead of rubber alien/entity of the week, we get some three dimensional characters with a good plot. Definitely progress.

    On the subject of intrastellar travel at light speed, this is strangely absent from the show. We go to Mintaka 4, but how many other planets are in the Mintaka system. I’m assuming that Mintaka 4 is the 4th planet there, but more is never revealed. The only time you could be 21 minutes from anything in space would be if you’re travelling from one point to another within a solar system. And this begs the question, what were they doing at the first point? Star Trek does a better job than other sci-fi universes at getting real science in there, but there’s also a lot of handwaveium powering the shows.

    Right now, I really want to see more near future stuff, taking place with tech that’s around the corner. The trailer to “The Martian” had my full attention. There are plenty of dangers, and therefore opportunity for interesting narrative, in space travel that we haven’t figured out yet without having to cross foils with the Romulan Empire.   

  8. Randi Cohen Avatar

    Totally agree, Jarok is a great character, and particularly heart-wrenching is imagining the impact that all this will have on his daughter. I would love a book or sequel of some kind addressing that.

  9. R. Alex Reutter Avatar

    Everyone has already heaped praise on Sloyan; I’ll pile on, because he earned it.  He and Stewart are both great in this episode.  Not much else to say.

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