1.7 – “Lonely Among Us”

1.7 – “Lonely Among Us”

Plot: En route to a peace parliament, the ship skirts a strange interstellar cloud, accidentally pulling a life form made of pure energy on board. The stowaway jumps from crewmember to crewmember and into the computers, causing anomalies and eventually overtaking the ship. Data gets Sherlockian as Riker and Yar labor to keep a subplot about warring ambassadors from hijacking the main drama.

Thoughts: My, my. Formal dress uniforms! They look like dresses. Besides having skirts, they don’t seem very different from the everyday uniforms. 

Riker says he just can’t understand conflict based on custom, religion, or economics. Neither can the writers, apparently, because this episode is pretty dull. What is the point in having a Federation anyway, if not for defense or trade? Transporting delegates and ambassadors used to be important stuff in “Journey to Babel” and “Elaan of Troyius.” Here, it just seems to be an irritating chore, which Riker and Yar do badly with no consequences. One of the diplomats is killed, and no one, least of all the Captain, seems to care.

It’s disappointing that no one is able to stands up effectively to the Captain after he is obviously possessed by an alien. Picard actually develops some backbone for the first time under the alien’s influence–which no one can seem to handle. Sigh.

One of the things I find irritating so far about TNG is that nobody seems to know what their job is. We have all these characters, yet there’s no science officer, and no permanent Chief Engineer, both roles needed by the ship and in the scripts. Yar, ostensibly chief of security, at one point performs analysis of the sensor readings of the energy cloud, which was always Spock’s job in TOS. Geordi and Worf are shown performing maintenance work on a sensor array away from the bridge–why? Because there aren’t any engineers? At this point in the series, I can’t even tell you what Worf’s regular job is supposed to be (although he is usually shown sitting or standing on the bridge), which sets him apart from Riker and Troi, whose full-time duties are second-guessing the Captain.

The ultimate problem here is that the episode just isn’t challenging. While it mostly avoids being offensive (the low bar set by several of the previous episodes), no real mystery or suspense ever develops, nor does there seem to be anything at stake (maybe they’ll be late to a diplomatic conference that no one seems to care about). There are no interesting concepts, just the activity of chasing around a motivation-free, characterless energy being for the requisite number of minutes until the end credits.

There are three highlights: Data’s droll scenes imitating Sherlock Holmes, Picard’s long monologue under possession by the entity (Stewart still has a silver tongue!), and the lovely special effects of the energy cloud. Those are three elements I am happy watching even without a strong story underneath them.

I can’t grade this too much on a curve, however. I believe the plot of the episode is less singular, remarkable, or eventful than any episode of TOS Season 3, despite having a teleplay by Trek legend D.C. Fontana. Although it’s refreshing to avoid the sexism, I still have to give this a Grade: Fail. I wish I could be nicer!

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5 responses to “1.7 – “Lonely Among Us””

  1. Kevin Black Avatar

    The point of most of the scenes involving the ambassador subplot seems to be “other cultures are icky and gross!”

  2. Randi Cohen Avatar

    Love the points about how people do not have clear/rationally designed functions on the ship, and agree with everything else too.

    What is “upwind” on a starship?

     

    Nice electrocuted snarl on Worf.  Michael Dorn is one of the few actors on this show that I never find to be annoying at all.  Occasionally unreasonably easily defeated in battle, but never annoying.

     

    Weird electrical intruder: it seems it can stun someone and make them wild, or it can take them over subtly, or it can throw them across the room and kill them.  Not much explanation of that in the episode.

     What kind of empath can’t tell the difference between alien mind control and ambivalence?

     Preachiness of characters (without actually demonstrating any advanced character traits) and unfunny joke of savages thinking humans are savage continues.  I do like that everyone in the future is eating Morningstar Farms chikn (or the equivalent).

    Better than the first few eps but unfortunately that is not saying much.  Wish we knew more about the alien presence.  Also, lots of time spent on developing the peace delegation subplot all to add up to a not-funny-at-all punchline at the end.  As a supposedly super-advanced form of human who will not even kill animals, should the crew not be more appalled, instead of admonishing the security chief that welcoming the captain back is more important??  It seems like two halves of an episode instead of one whole one.

  3. Randi Cohen Avatar

    really good point!!! did denise choose to leave?

  4. Randi Cohen Avatar

    I suggest you try “measure of a man” in season 2… I just watched it and I think it is the first truly good episode. The characters are already starting to get less stupid and ineffectual… it is just a really long haul waiting! Agree that the original triad have it all over the new one still but it does get better!

    Also my personal pick if you are going to give up on tng is try ds9. Very different sensibility than the original series and it has Dax, who is an amazing character concept.

  5. Kevin Black Avatar

    You have to make some real allowances for even the best episodes of season 1, which are few and far between. Based on just the first 2 episodes of season 2, they seem to have gotten some of their ducks in a row, dramatically speaking, during the hiatus. From the interviews/articles I’ve been reading, the biggest leap forward for TNG may have been when they replaced the lead producer (Michael Hurley, replaced by Rick Berman) and acquired a new head writer (Michael Pillar) at the beginning of season 3.  Berman and Pillar then lead the team through the end of the series.

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