5.8 — “Unification II”

5.8 — “Unification II”

Plot: Having discovered Spock on the planet Romulus, Picard and Data are drawn into Spock’s personal mission to bring about reunification between the Romulan and Vulcan peoples. Meanwhile, Riker tracks down a series of clues related to a stolen Vulcan freighter. 

Thoughts: It turns out even Leonard Nimoy can’t save a bad script. There isn’t really any story to speak of here. I really like only two moments: Spock’s scene with Data aboard the Bird of Prey, and Worf singing Klingon opera.

The rest is missed opportunities. So many that you wonder whether teleplay writer Michael Piller or director Cliff Bole ever watched TOS. They certainly don’t seem to want to give us any good classic Spock moments. The character is written as being very emotional and unsettled for most of the episode. Even the Romulan characters seem dispassionate by comparison. Why not let Spock be Spock? That would have been better.

The ending undermines Spock even further by closing on an emotional grimace, which Spock would consider to be very undignified. Sigh. Even if you want to end on the father-son reconciliation story (I would have preferred the self-sacrifice story instead, exploring why Spock is driven, after so many years of service, to leave comfort, safety, and familiarity behind), Nimoy is a subtle actor, and there are so many better ways to approach this beat.

Annoying details are wrong. There is no earthly reason, at the beginning, why Spock would refuse to address Picard as “Captain.” He’s pretty good at saying it, and of all people he should respect Starfleet. Later, it doesn’t make sense for the Romulan youth to address him as “Mr.”, which is shipboard usage, not an appropriate title under the circumstances.

sunny jim pointed out that it would be more like a Ferengi to demand payment from Riker for the information he is seeking, not to just whimper and be bullied. Once acquisitive merchants, the Ferengi are now being treated more like foppish sex addicts. Because sex, I guess.

The biggest missed opportunity of all is failure to exploit the long history of Star Trek. The reference to Spock’s role in the Klingon peace process is meant to be a teaser for Star Trek VI. The only other reference we get is nonspecific and groan inducing: “In your own way, you are as stubborn as another Captain of the Enterprise I once knew.”

Sela is also wasted. This time they don’t even talk about her being related to Tasha. Her presence seems to serve mostly as a signal that some off-the-wall craziness is about to go down.

I feel like I should say something nice. The matte painting of Romulus is lovely.

2 of 5 clever Hologram tricks.

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6 responses to “5.8 — “Unification II””

  1. Allen Knutson Avatar

    I remember my breath taken away when Spock first appears, and we see what a real Vulcan looks like, showing up Picard and Data as the Hallowe’en-getup punks that they are.

  2. Randi Cohen Avatar

    Agree with everything you both said!!!

    I will only add that Spock had a cute hero-worship thing going with the young Romulan, and I did like how logical he was about the whole betrayal thing.  But yeah, definitely that grimace at the end was overdone, as well as the petulance at the beginning, and I’m totally more into self-sacrifice than into the father-son thing (their disagreement didn’t even seem to be based on much in the first place, annoyingly).   

    I also really like the two scenes you mention, Kev, and not much else!  Also, that lady lounge singer sure has a super-crazy nose.

    BTW, doesn’t that whole hologram trick seem like people could be playing it to each other all the darned time?  Like, constantly?  And yet somehow this is the first we’ve seen of it… 

  3. Kevin Black Avatar

    I want a personal hologram generator which can make me invisible.

  4. Randi Cohen Avatar

    I want one that makes me look like I have awesome magical butterfly wings. 

  5. Kevin Black Avatar

    Ooh! I want one that can make me look good in orange.

  6. Randi Cohen Avatar

    Now Kevin, that’s just crazy. 

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