3.1 — “Evolution”

3.1 — “Evolution”

Plot: In the Kavis Alpha sector to observe neutronium decay from a massive stellar explosion, the Enterprise undergoes strange technical failures and computer malfunctions that appear to threaten the safety of the ship and its crew. It seems Wesley’s science experiment has escaped from its bottle. Meanwhile, Dr. Beverly Crusher has returned to the ship, reunites with her son, and worries about his normal development as a teenager.

Thoughts: Welcome back, to that same old place that you laughed about. We freshen up this season with new uniforms for the featured male players, although you can still see the old collarless jumpsuits on background performers. Troi seems to be wearing a more raspberry version of her plum outfit from season two. For some reason, it really offends me today. What kind of work outfit is that? I don’t believe she would wear it to go clubbing. Sure, she looks great, but this outfit says “I am here to be eye candy, not a regular part of the crew.”

Act One begins with a closeup of Wesley’s zits. It’s how we know time has passed. Beverly Crusher is back! “I missed two inches.” That seems ineffably sad. We don’t get a sense of how Beverly’s career decisions were made, or how they make sense. I’m glad that they at least acknowledge the situation. Has Wesley been living alone all this time, raising himself and letting the ship cook for him? Does he still have separate quarters? Do computers literally raise children in the 24th century? 

I found it momentarily jarring that when Crusher goes to talk to Picard alone, it’s about her son, not about the computer malfunctions that form the main plot of the episode. A few seconds later, I appreciated the choice–it seems real. These people aren’t thinking about their jobs and plot MacGuffins all the time.

No mention of Pulaski at all. Sigh.

Very bad score for this episode. Pan pipes, seriously? 351 years from now? I’m depressed.

Nothing we know about Wesley’s character is consistent with him putting that much product in his hair. I don’t buy his actions after the nanites’ escape. He’s aware of the danger to the ship, aware it’s his fault, yet he hides this information from everyone. What is he, six? He should be court-martialed. I’m afraid his only reason for temporarily concealing it is because otherwise the episode would not have been 44 minutes.

So, the plot isn’t great, basically a rehash of “Lonely Among Us” and maybe a few other early TNG episodes, with fewer crew deaths. Lacking is a strong sense of wonder or science fiction theme. I find the baseball monologue insufferable. But the episode is structured well, with a nice build. The show is not going to turn fully around at once, or with one hundred percent consistency, but it’s kind of nice to return to it.

Last season I went to a six point rating scale, in order to make room for distinctions at the bottom of the scale. I will be optimistic now, and return to the five-point rating system we used for TOS. 2.5 out of 5 Sousa marches cranked up to eleven.

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7 responses to “3.1 — “Evolution””

  1. Randi Cohen Avatar

    Oh my gosh, I love that show, and particularly that theme song!  Funny how we picked up on such different things in this episode, although I definitely see what you are talking about with everything you said… except I forgot the baseball monologue, and it sounds like that’s not a bad thing!

    Wow!  This feels like a different show, almost.  The plot actually hinges on character development rather than on technobabble!  The score seems much better also.

    I am annoyed by Wesley as usual, but at least it is about him making a dumb kid mistake rather than about him just seeming to be congratulated as a child prodigy for no particular reason.  (And yes, I don’t know about court martialed, but he certainly should be punished in some way).  I am annoyed at Dr. Krusher for being a meddling mom, but she seems to at least have something useful to do in this episode.  And Gates McFadden’s acting seems less stiff.

    (Worf was in charge of raising Wesley per last ep Season 1 although never actually saw evidence of that during Season 2).

    The decision to let Data be taken over by the nanites seems a bit crazy to me, but it does provide for a neat encounter with alien life that appears genuinely alien.s  I am reminded of an SF book I read once about alien life on a neutron star that was also tiny and evolved incredibly quickly and interacted with humans.  Larry Niven I think.  If they actually did evolve that quickly it would probably be more challenging than it looked to hold a conversation… but why nitpick.

    Troi… oh Troi.  What is exactly is the point of baiting the narcissist?  Why would you bother?  Your attempts only make him more defensive, which if you were in fact any kind of decent counselor you could have predicted.  And it was a clumsy attempt to validate his viewpoint at best, also clearly destined to simply annoy him and put him on the defensive.  Ugh, it’s hard to watch Troi speak sometimes.

    I loved Guinan in this episode, and appreciated the moral dilemma which Picard faces (crew’s safety vs. preserving alien life vs. completing his mission).  It would have been even better if the experiment had been intended to provide some crucial piece of information that would have potentially solved some critical problem to Starfleet… as it is, because we have no idea of the implications of potential findings, the only real reason to want to allow the experiment to go on is the ego of the scientist… which is not all that motivational really.  So that makes the plot a bit weaker.

    But overall it’s a great effort as compared to basically every episode of the first two seasons.  Things happen, people develop emotionally, lessons are learned (especially humility and apologizing/coming clean about things you’ve done).  Why is it that so far every memorable STTNG episode has involved a close-minded narcissistic scientist?  A mystery, but I’m hoping that this marks a significant change for the better for the series!

  2. Kevin Black Avatar

    As I recall, Data was in charge of Wesley’s education, and Worf was going to… , erm, “tuck him in at night.” Which makes me wonder 1) what do all the other 1,000 people on board do?; and 2) does he live alone? I guess he was 16-17 years old last season when Dr. Crusher was away, which is plenty old enough to go away to boarding school, but fairly young to be on his own in an unstructured environment.

  3. Randi Cohen Avatar

    It would have been cool too have a Worf parenting episode!

  4. R. Alex Reutter Avatar

    I also want a Worf trying to parent Wesley episode!

    Wesley is sooo cute when he sleeps through the beginning of his shift.  And also when the episode title is supposed to be a metaphor his personal growth.

    Once again, the crew’s attempts to do science and exploration get sidelined by the Quest for Plot.  I’m not sure what’s going on, but shaky ship cam is never a good sign.  Does the fact that shaky ship cam happened just as they were about the launch the probe mean anything?  [sadly, no]  After the commercial break, Data announces 30 seconds to impact?  Impact with what?  Are they being pulled into the neutron star?  There’s nothin’ out here!  And afterwards, there’s no record of control malfunction.  Well, I guess nothing must have happened, then!

    “What can I do to you for you, doctor?”  You know what, doctor?  I didn’t get into as much trouble as Wesley at 17, and I’m pretty damn happy.  Is it wrong to miss Pulaski already?  It certainly deserves at least a mention why she’s no longer on board.

    They’ve finally figured out that something is seriously wrong with ship’s computer.  

    Now they know the scientist would rather die than leave.  Um… maybe you should have security shadow him for a while?  Sigh.  Of course they don’t.

    So… Wesley accidentally let gremlins loose in the Enterprise?  And while I love Guinan, it’s his duty to report this IMMEDIATELY.  His dereliction of duty is, agree, court-martialable, and no one even seems disappointed in him.  

    I don’t buy the argument that the nanites shouldn’t be destroyed.  We could have gotten to the point where we recognize that the nanites evolved just as easily without this mushy “nanites are people, too” BS.

    Really?  The nanites are able to identify and attack the astrophysicist, but can’t otherwise communicate?  

    Oh, god.  Technobabble technobabble, we want to use Data as the mouthpiece for the nanites so we’re not reading their responses off a screen.

    “What do you know about this girl?!”  Okay, I’m missing Pulaski just a little bit less now.

  5. R. Alex Reutter Avatar

    Why is this astrophysicist from off-ship (and perhaps Wesley) the only scientist on board who seems distraught by the possibility of the experiment not happening**?  Clearly the Enterprise’s astrophysics group and related sciences should be badgering Picard by offering to stay behind in some of the shuttlecrafts in order to carry on the experiment.  Some of them have children about Wesley’s age, and these teenagers are helping to retrofit the shuttlecrafts with equipment to gather the data from the experiment (or whatever).  One of these is a pretty blonde, so that when Beverly sees this group hanging out in Ten Forward at the end of the episode, /we/ know who these kids are, but she doesn’t.   #ifixeditforyou  

    ** okay, we know why: the tyranny of not hiring extras

  6. Randi Cohen Avatar

    Hahahaha!!!  Agreed!  It would help if this experiment seemed in some way relevant to anyone other than the scientist himself… right now it just looks like he is a self-possessed jerk getting so caught up in it.

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