2.3 — “Elementary, Dear Data”

2.3 — “Elementary, Dear Data”

Plot: Geordi and Data take advantage of some down time to play Sherlock Holmes in the Holodeck. A challenge from Dr. Pulaski proves that you should never dare a man under 40 to do anything. Seeking a suitable challenge for Data’s deductive powers, Geordi summons up master criminal Professor James Moriarty–but an error gives Moriarty consciousness, and a means to attack the ship.

Thoughts: Another strong episode makes me hopeful that the vicissitudes and doldrums of season one are behind us (augh–since I first wrote this, I’ve seen a few more episodes).

I like Pulaski in this one. Her beef against Data does not seem so poisonous, because she has a sense of humor about it, conveys curiosity about Data instead of just animosity, and appears to at least be open to persuasion. Data has no trouble clearing the low bar that she sets for him, so his feelings probably aren’t hurt. The best thing about Pulaski (as Randi has been pointing out) is that she seems more or less like a real person, in contrast to some other members of the crew, and this episode does nothing to undo that.

The problem with her polemic against Data in the first two episodes is that it shows poor social awareness. Whatever the foundation of her concerns about trusting an androiod of alien provenance with being third in command of the ship (maybe I’m xenophobic, but I share the concern), she should be aware that blatant disrespect towards Data is socially inappropriate in context. If she has concerns, she should find a different way to raise them, and should do it urgently in private. Outwardly disrespecting Data is not just a slight against Data, but a slight against Picard and the other bridge crew. I hope this episode builds a bridge between the two characters and we don’t have to hear any more about it.

Several factors make this a stronger episode than so many that have gone before. The rapport between Geordi and Data is nice. The production value achieved by recreating 19th century London on a soundstage with a TV budget is very good. The costumes, as in “The Big Goodbye,” are a highlight, although its hard to imagine where they came from. The ship’s replicator? The replicator, in that case, is very creative.

Best of all, although creating an antagonist for Holmes is not actually very appropriate(*), Moriarty is a very good antagonist for this episode, because unlike the other antagonists we have seen on TNG so far, Moriarty has a legitimate point of view, distinct from the other characters, that completely justifies his actions. The episode is quite a different from his point of view. What if you spotted an error in your environment and discovered that your whole life was a simulation created for someone else’s amusement? It’s like The Truman Show, or as Moriarty probes the artificiality of his world, his very own “For the World is Hollow and I Have Touched the Sky.” Yes, they did take a few steps down this road in “The Big Goodbye,” but here the theme is much more developed.

While Moriatry is perhaps capable of defeating Data, as he learns about his situation he chooses different goals for himself, and paradigm shifts away from archvillain, while still displaying a will to live and cunning worthy of the Arthur Conan Doyle pedigree. Picard gets to talk him down peacefully, because we’re still watching Star Trek, not Remington Steele or Magnum P.I.

Still, is there enough here? Does the story coast along too much on its dress up charms? Could it use more twists and turns? Is there enough jeopardy for characters and crew? This episode is pretty good, but not on the level of the best Trek. It’s not even quite a “Court Martial” or “A Piece of the Action”–but still a big improvement over season one.

Warp 4 of 6.

(*) Professor Moriarty is a quite minor character in the Holmes canon, despite appearing in practically every film version ever. Doyle invented him for the first time iand killed him off in the same 18-page short story, and he never appears again, although he is referenced two more times. Homes’ brother Mycroft appears in canon twice as often–still barely at all. Doyle is an amazing writer–I can still read the Holmes stories today and they are just as compulsive and fresh as I image they were in the 1890s.

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9 responses to “2.3 — “Elementary, Dear Data””

  1. Randi Cohen Avatar

    Finally, a unique story that has not been “done before and done better by the original” or is just not worth telling!

    I loooooved the performance of the guest actor playing Moriarty, he was just so compelling. And the plea for a continued existence was moving. I felt that saving him in computer storage was kind of an easy out of what is a truly interesting moral dilemma (and one that has come up before on STTNG during the detective episode but was evaded). In general, is it a great idea to create beings out of thin air and then vaporize them for entertainment? I don’t think I’d be comfortable doing that to animals, let alone people with the capacity to speak and think, even if their thought processes were artificially limited.

    I really like Pulaski soooo much better than Krusher, which is surprising to me because I don’t remember liking her this much the first time I watched the series. But her character has a dignity and gravitas that Krusher’s just doesn’t, and other characters seem to treat her with more respect. Even though she was the damsel in distress, which was annoying, at least she handled it with dignity and sparred with Moriarty effectively. I didn’t really buy the romantic element, but whatevs.

    I wasn’t totally captivated by the episode the way I was with the “body snatchers” one, but it was charming and had intriguing elements. I think the weak point in it was Lavarr Burton’s acting, which does not really move me. If the whole show had just been Data vs. Moriarty with Pulaski making an appearance, I think I would have felt more drawn in. A good episode though, overall. I’m happy with the direction the 2nd season is taking so far.

  2. Randi Cohen Avatar

    Kevin Black​: Pulaski is paranoid and distrustful of authority and technology and not particularly diplomatic. That is just Pulaski.

    And yes, Doyle is a fantastic writer. He and Kipling are the two classic authors I’ve read whose writing still absorbs me. Can’t wait to read to Julia when she is older.

  3. Kevin Black Avatar

    It raises the question: if the Holodeck is able to create intelligent life, is the Holodeck itself intelligent and alive? Has the crew overlooked this fact (along with a myriad of other elementary safety precautions that could be applied to that deathtrap)?

  4. R. Alex Reutter Avatar

    Oh, dear, just from the title we know it’s gonna be an awkward holodeck episode.  

    Is Geordi’s assistant hitting on Data?  Geordi has a thing for old boats, too?  The whole bridge crew seems to share this mania.  Ah, this is all just a preamble to Data and Geordi doing a Sherlock Holmes program.

    The episode actually flows well from beginning to end; from engineering to the holodeck to ten forward and back to the holodeck, then out to brief the rest of the crew on the situation and finally back into the holodeck to resolve it.  The resolution is sensible and for once no one does anything ungodly stupid; even Geordi’s mistake that causes the situation was an easy one to make — from our perspective, he essentially wanted a logic puzzle that could defeat Data, but the (perhaps sentient?) ship’s computer interpreted it otherwise.  

    Once again, a temporary fluctuation is noticed (this time by Worf) and nothing is (or more fairly, can be) done about it until later.

    Geordi and Data work well together as characters, and they’ve done a nice job of adding Popinski and her disdain for Data to the mix.  I’m a little sad that they scrub Geordi entirely from going into the holodeck to help resolve the problem.  (BTW, I really like the fact that they simply state that the memory banks on the ship are “vast” and don’t use a number that would be laughable today.)  At least Geordi’s in the denouement?

    Even better, this episode strives for answers to big questions like “what constitutes being alive?” in a way that none of the Season 1 episodes seemed to.  They pick up on the theme of the living holographic image many years later in Voyager, but it’s all right here in TNG Season 2.  

    So, gonna eat my words.  This is a great holodeck episode.  Easily the best TNG episode so far.  I do think there’s enough here, and definitely better than “A Piece of the Action”.

    Here’s hoping for more good ones!

  5. Randi Cohen Avatar

    I just cannot get behind it being better than “A Piece of the Action”!  “Spocko”.  Captain Kirk driving a car.  Fizzbin!  Just no.

    But I do like this episode better than most TNG I’ve seen so far.  I still liked the body-snatching aliens and the Lwaxana episode better.  But not by that much.

  6. R. Alex Reutter Avatar

    I need to go back and watch the body snatching aliens and Lwaxana.

  7. Randi Cohen Avatar

    Not the same episode… very interesting if it were though!

  8. sunny jim Avatar

    I do enjoy a seeing some costumes that aren’t horrible, but unfortunately, that seems to be because they’re historically based, and not because the production team is getting better. 

    Actually, the biggest problem I have with the premise of this episode is that Geordi never said, “Cancel program.”  Surely, as the one who requested this holodeck scenario, he could stop it? Other than that, I think this one gives us some big things to think about, which is great.  Right now, computers are creating original music, giving us investment advice, and diagnosing our diseases.  How long before we get a true Artificial Intelligence that’s self-aware?  And whether that awareness has a (holographic) body or not, when does it become life? 

    Data is essentially just a really good computer, with a body, but then the Enterprise has a really good computer in it, too.  Other than size and programming, what’s the difference?  But you get the sense that the contemporary people (like the crew) would view the destruction of Data as a “death”, and the destruction of the Enterprise as “property damage”.  Where do you draw the line?

  9. R. Alex Reutter Avatar

    I have a feeling Kirk viewed the destruction of the Enterprise as keenly as any redshirt. I don’t know whether that says more about his views on redshirts or the sentience of ship’s computer, but… “My god, Bones. What have I done?” That had more pathos in the delivery than David’s death.

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