2.1 — “The Child”

2.1 — “The Child”

Plot:  It is a time of transition aboard the Enterprise. While new Chief Engineer La Forge prepares a containment unit to transport plague samples, Counselor Troi is impregnated without consent by an alien of mysterious origin and unknown intent.

Thoughts:  Here we are back again! The ship has a new doctor, lounge, and bartender. Riker has a beard. Troi and Wesley have new clothes. Worf and Geordi are wearing new colors, and have new jobs. They did a good job with the special effects on this episode.

I don’t know what to think about the plot of this one. If you watched the Phase II fan series with us, the story seems very familiar. That’s because both shows were adapted from a script prepared for the television series Star Trek Phase II, which was intended to continue the stories of Kirk, Spock, and the rest, before being scrapped in favor of Star Trek: The Motion Picture. Producer Maurice Hurley rewrote the script so they would have something to shoot quickly at the end of the Big Writer’s Strike. The fan film was shot using the original script. The pregnant crewmember was supposed to be the Deltan Ilia, whose character was loosely used as a template for Troi. The idea of an an entity made of energy entering the ship from deep space was also used in TNG 1.7 — “Lonely Among Us.”

So, there’s an effectively creepy premise, which automatically creates high stakes for Troi. Yet it is treated very nonchalantly. It’s like they wanted to press all drama out and prove you could make a revolutionary story like that dull. I could not help thinking what severe trauma  the writers are putting Troi through, first with the pregnancy, then with the loss, and for what? There are no scenes that get inside Troi’s head and confront what’s happening to her. It seems she has no personal misgivings or apprehensions, or if she does, no attention is paid to them. Somehow this episode, of all episodes, is still all about the men.

In the briefing room scene, they talk about abortion and linger over footage of a fetus, which comes off as bold, given the political climate. The words rape and violation, however, are never mentioned. The child, who seems to be his own father, apologizes for leaving Troi in that brief scene, but never for imposing on her without consent. Why should he? He made it so pleasant for her. What does she have to complain about?

I found the scenes referencing Beverly Crusher to be jarring. The facts are that Gates McFadden got fired, and Maurice Hurley didn’t have the decency to even bring her back for a guest spot to say goodbye to the fans or to her son. Yet the actors have to play several jolly scenes where they talk about her like a dear friend who is so happy with her promotion. I feel bad for her, even as I think “No way is that character qualified to be the lead medical officer of Starfleet.”

Pulaski, so far, is fairly abrasive. It will take a while longer for me to decide whether I like her. The actor Diana Muldaur was a featured guest star in two episodes of TOS, 2.20 “Return to Tomorrow,” and 3.5 “Is There In Truth No Beauty?”

There are puppies! So, not all bad. Mirina Sirtis proves again that she can act, although I hear she’s not crazy about this episode. She must have had questions when she read the script.

Borrowing the rating system from TheViewscreen.com: warp two out of six.

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10 responses to “2.1 — “The Child””

  1. Randi Cohen Avatar

    Kevin Black : Somehow this episode, of all episodes, is still all about the men.

    aMEN to that!!!!!  In spades, and well said.

    Monophylos Fortikos : I completely agree about Pulaski, and also that makes complete sense about writers trying to force a parallel that does not really work for these characters.  Perhaps just because I’m comparing her to Beverly and Troi, but I truly do love Pulaski: first woman character on TNG to be a human/officer first and only secondarily a woman.  

    Oh… so the fan episode was a remake, kind of!

    I CANNOT believe they are actually debating whether or not Deanna should have an abortion without asking her opinion or what she is willing to allow… unbelievable.

    Wouldn’t Troi have to eat an unbelievable amount of food to gain 30 lbs in 2 days?

    Fascinating that they are setting guard on a newborn baby but didn’t over 3 grown individuals in the last episode.  

    Are there no female crewmembers qualified to stand guard during L&D???  How does a former love interest appear uninvited and just stand there staring?  Is any of these writers a woman?  Does any of them know any women?????  How is Troi touched by the fact that Riker was watching without her permission?

    I’m going to give STTNG more credit than it probably deserves and assume that is a birthing stool Troi is sitting on.  It’s certainly not possible to give birth in a regular comfy chair like that.

    Pulaski seems more competent than Krusher but that line to Data about a circuit for bruised feelings is just odd, especially given the warmth in her delivery which doesn’t match the insensitivity of the communication.  Also, how is running her tricorder over his body supposed to clarify the origin of his comment?  That’s super-weird too. 

    Ummm… “I was curious so I decided to impregnate you without consent and have you give birth to me.”  OK.  I don’t think I’d probably respond so positively, personally.

    Glad Guinan has made her debut, although it’s not particularly an impressive one.

    Really?  Worf is going to “tuck Wesley in at night”?  Is that actually a job?  And if so, why would a Klingon volunteer?  Bizarre.

  2. Kevin Black Avatar

    Very good point about Pulaski being an officer first and only secondarily a woman. I’ll have more to say about her next time.

  3. Randi Cohen Avatar

    OK, I guess maybe meant in jest, but weird socially awkward jest if so!  Maybe I am still grading on a curve, or maybe meanness is easier for me to forgive than smugness or vacuousness, because I still like her better than most of the other characters. 🙂   

  4. R. Alex Reutter Avatar

    Geordi is now chief engineer and Riker has a beard!  It’s just a normal day aboard the Enterprise until they pick up an unexpected hitchhiker.  Data notices a power fluctuation almost immediately, but the intruder isn’t truly felt until it… does… something… not-quite explicit to Deanna?  Ewww.

    Opening credits roll.  Oh, right.  Pulaski.  Really, Picard hasn’t met the new chief medical officer yet?  And, wait, why is Wesley on board?  He’s not with his mom? (note: I like that this does get dealt with)  And Ten Forward?  Is this the first appearance of Guinan and Ten Forward?

    Deanna is pregnant and Riker bellows “who is the father?”  How about none of your damn business in the 24th century, bub?

    The baby is born with Data the doula, and Worf looks ready to tear its head off.  Deanna finally notices Riker.  “Were you here all along?”  WHAT?!  Deanna couldn’t sense Riker standing 10 feet away, even in childbirth?  Ridiculous.

    Alien child grows up fast!  

    Dr. Pulaski is kindof a jerk to Data.  One is his name, and one isn’t!  How is the desire to be called by the name you wished to be called “bruised feelings”?  What if we call you Dr. Popinski “by mistake”? 

    Stuff is going on with Wesley.  Thank goodness there’s a ship’s counselor!  Oh, oh, wait…

    The containment unit won’t hold the virus!  Too bad we can’t magically transport it into a star.  

    The star child dies and becomes a ball of light again.  Will we ever get an answer to the question “why is it here?”  Yay!  And we do, but why couldn’t star child have said so in the first place when Picard asked?  Why the mystery for the sake of creating mystery?

    Wesley gets to stay on the Enterprise!  I love Worf accepting the responsibility of “tucking Wesley in at night.”  He’s such a sweetie.  It takes a command crew to raise a child.  

    In the end, the whole star child main plot crossed with the virus pickup is rather clumsy and dull, and it’s the Wesley subplot (and the addition of Whoopi to the cast) that delivers the “child growing up” meat of the episode.  

    It’s worth dwelling on this for a moment.  We saw how everyone struggled to figure out their roles for an entire season, and Whoopi comes on and nails her character in the first episode without any more to work with than the rest of the cast.  What an actor.  

  5. Kevin Black Avatar

    Snort. Where is that counselor when you want her? She’s always underfoot when you don’t. At least the 16 year old has his bartender to turn to. They haven’t stopped drinking alcohol in the 24th century? I guess that would be against continuity with Lt. Cmdr. Scott.

  6. sunny jim Avatar

    Yippee!  The clothes are getting better!  (Not all the way there yet – I’m still waiting for the uniforms to get collars.)  I was so excited to see Wesley in his 2nd season outfit, and was thrilled that he had finished out his bad-80’s-sweater-of-the-month club subscription.  He’s grown, too.  Wesley – lookin’ good! 

    Also thankfully, they’ve given Troi a slightly better one piece bodysuit, and better hair.  They’re still massively over-doing the eye makeup on her, which always bothers me a little. 

    Best of all, Dr. Pulaski’s version of the uniform.  There’s a garment that looks relatively comfortable, and might be flattering even on an actress who isn’t a size 0. 

    I’m happy to see Guinan’s entry to the show, as well, although it does usher in the era of costumes made from 20 yards of knit jersey, topped with a bizarre hat. (Here’s how you make the hat:  cut a shape out of cardboard, then wrap it onto your head with three yards of knit jersey in your favorite fully-saturated color.)  I feel that the door into Ten Forward compensates for this, however – the etched Starfleet symbol on glass in the little round window, on a wood door – it’s gorgeous, and perfect, and if I was a huge ST fan (instead of a huge LOTR fan), I’d be thinking of where in my house I could put a door like that.

    I was intensely bothered by the fact that Pulaski seems to be the only one on board who cares that Troi was raped, and equally bothered by the abortion discussion in the observation lounge.  The writers really haven’t earned Riker’s reaction – if they want him to be that jealous, they need to spell out the history and current status of their relationship better.  Although, I can’t believe that a reasonable person in the 24th century (or now, for that matter), would be that outraged about their ex getting pregnant with someone else.  That’s generally a sign of an abusive, controlling asshole, not an ex that you’re on good terms with still.

    Good points all to Randi Cohen  – especially that the empathy didn’t know that Riker was standing behind her (probably having some powerful feelings) during the birth. 

  7. Randi Cohen Avatar

    To be fair, I think that particular point belonged to R. Alex Reutter .  Actually I think childbirth is pretty distracting, not sure if I would have noticed a 20-elephant marching band in the delivery room at some points.  So that specific issue didn’t bother me… only basically everything else about how the childbirth was handled! 

  8. R. Alex Reutter Avatar

    Everything else about how they handled the pregnancy and childbirth was far, far worse, but even in a difficult childbirth (which this was not) I cannae help but think that Deanna would be able to sense someone to whom we are told she is emotionally very close.

    Lwaxana, I imagine, live telepathically tweeted Deanna’s delivery.  FWIW, I’m this close to reporting what Lwaxana would have done instead of what Deanna actually did do in every episode…

  9. Randi Cohen Avatar

    R. Alex Reutter: Love it!!!!  Go for it!!!!

    WWLD = What Would Lwaxana Do.

  10. R. Alex Reutter Avatar

    Oh, I should also point out that it was Sarah MacMillan who made the original comment (IRL) about Deanna not empathically sensing Riker in the delivery room.  My notes are usually peppered with comments from her.  You can tell because they’re the most insightful ones.  🙂

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