1.26 — “The Neutral Zone”

1.26 — “The Neutral Zone”

Plot: Data finds cyrogenically frozen Caucasian popsicles 20th century humans aboard a derelict vessel at an inopportune time for Captain Picard. He has just been given the assignment to enter the Neutral Zone and investigate a series of destroyed outposts. Starfleet thinks the Romulans may be responsible.

Thoughts: Yaaaawn! This episode starts with some promise, but turns into a big letdown. If it appears that the writers totally ran out of gas, that isn’t far off from the truth. According to the Internet, the big 1988 writer’s strike hit just as this episode was being developed. Producer Maurice Hurley wrote what he could write in a day and a half, and there were no revisions. This episode had originally been planned as the first part of a two-part episode introducing the Borg. That introduction would wait until Season Two.

The impact of the Big Writers Strike also explains why Season Two will only have 22 episodes, instead of the normal 26. That’s good news–we’ll get through it faster!

Picard’s evident annoyance that his staff would have the nerve to rescue marooned refugees from a derelict ship was amusing. And they’re from the 20th century, too! That’s just too much; Picard now needs some tea. “FINE–if we must have time travelers from Earth’s history on board, everyone keep them away from me and I’ll pretend it isn’t happening.”

But I thought Picard was a 20th century enthusiast? One of the refugees could have met the creator of Dixon Hill!

The Texan guy isn’t very convincing as a–what? Rock musician? Country western star? The “show don’t tell” maxim is violated constantly throughout the episode. The moralizing about the 20th century is quite broad–but it is interesting to hear of the late 20th century being referred to as being in the writers’ future, although in our past. It’s almost like we are the time travelers, in 2015.

There is a reference to television dying out by 2040. I don’t want to blow your minds, but we are closer today to 2040 than we are to 1988, when this episode first aired. It seems quite plausible that conventional television will be dead by then–but probably not filmed entertainment in general. It just won’t be watched on a television (probably).

The script calls back to “Balance of Terror” (destroyed outposts in the Neutral Zone) and “Space Seed” (frozen 20th century space travelers) and gives us a cool new Romulan ship design…. all for nothing. The Romulans do nothing, then leave. The destroyed outposts are not explained. Oh well. Plus, the Romulans look goofy. They are like math nerds sitting in judgment (NTTAWWT). Is this supposed to make us look forward to Season Two?

One interesting side note–this is the first (and only?) Star Trek episode to identify the date with a precise year, instead of a stardate. This year, 2364, is the peg on which all Star Trek future chronologies are based, working forward or backward from this point in time.

It would have been nice to end Season One on a high note. Grade: Fail.

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7 responses to “1.26 — “The Neutral Zone””

  1. sunny jim Avatar

    What I don’t get about our odd trio of contemporaries, is why (and how) Crusher brought them back to life. They were already dead – had died before being frozen. One of them didn’t even know that cryogenics was on the table. I would understand curing their various diseases if they were alive, but I didn’t know necromancy was something they could do in sickbay.

    Then, there’s our 20th century characters. The businessman who thinks his lawyers can’t wait a couple more days, and that demanding the attention of the captain of the ship he’s on in SPACE in a potential war zone is a good idea. The wife and mother who doesn’t ask after her children. And how did the wastrel manage to both pay for cryo and be in the right place to take advantage of it? They just aren’t very believable, any of them.

    Other than that, it’s just a weak episode. And I’ve never liked the Romulan costumes, but that’s a discussion for another day.

  2. Randi Cohen Avatar

    …So, no security on the new people?  You can’t just tel the communicator in their room to cut off access to certain channels?  Counselor Troi just leaves the passengers there without assigning any crewmen to answer their questions or give them the equivalent of a newspaper or history textbook?  If indeed power is now an illusion, as it is according to Captain Picard, how can there still be a ship’s hierarchy which includes Captain, Ensigns, and everything in between?  Could Mr. Offenhouse possibly be more annoying?  If they were trying to make a point about how far humans have progressed, surely a less ridiculous specimen of current humanity would have been a more believable place to start.

    On-bridge security is really so inadequate that a non-crew-member isn’t recognized and nobody thinks to stun the unauthorized guy that won’t leave the bridge?  Really?  And he is allowed to speak to the Romulans? REALLY???  What kind of a military do we have in the 24th century anyhow?  

    Overall, a lackluster season-ender.  The Romulans are not half as creepy as the body-snatching worms from prior episode, and they are half in truce anyhow.  The mysterious enemy is more interesting but the fact that the crew are not even planning to directly investigate and are instead discussing possibly ferrying the old-timers home makes it less than totally compelling.  Eh.

    Let’s hope Season 2 is better!

  3. Kevin Black Avatar

    It didn’t occur to me until I stare at the picture above, but the Romulan costumes do hearken back to the way they were dressed in the Original Series. Which they should have thought twice about, or executed better, or something.

    I would expect such a ridiculous caricature of Americans to come from a BBC show (everyone’s from Texas!), but TNG was filmed in Los Angeles.

    What I can’t get past is, even if you accept that these people would end up cyrogenically frozen (the housewife without her knowledge or consent–durrr), how is the mission of reviving them someday served by blasting the bodies off into space? I know they made some harumphing talking-into-their-hat expalanation about being safer from mechanical failures, but… storage space and backup power generation must be expensive in the 1990s. They aren’t even found in the vicinity of Earth. The price point of the “we blast you into space afterwards” version of the freezing service must exceed its competitors by a healthy margin. Also, weren’t the Eugenics Wars happening at the same time? Is that why the power grid is so unreliable?

  4. Kevin Black Avatar

    I also thought they raised some good points along the lines of “what exactly do you people do in the 24th century, and why do you do it?” Unfortunately, all questions and no answers.

  5. R. Alex Reutter Avatar

    Picard is at some meeting and the Enterprise comes across a derelict ship.  Riker shows an astounding lack of interest in human history, so it falls upon the nonhumans Worf and Data to soldier on and find three cryogenically frozen people.

    So… the Romulans are back.  This feels like it’s shaping up to be “Balance of Terror, part 2”.  

    Picard is going to dress down Data for trying to save lives from another century?  Really?  Where is your sense of history, Picard, if not your humanity?  

    Crusher awakens the female.  This is the point at which one of the TOS crew would fall in love, but here she merely gets a glance at Worf, and then faints.

    We swap back and forth between the captain readying for the encounter in the neutral zone, and the unfrozen cavemen.  We have a ridiculous scene in which Picard actually has to talk to the unfrozen cavemen, as if there is no one on staff who can see to them.  Why are these yahoos allowed to wander the ship after the first interruption?  Ludicrous.  

    So… we finally meet the Romulans and have a little chat, and then!!… they leave.  Did anything actually happen in this episode?

  6. R. Alex Reutter Avatar

    I’m still astounded by the fact that there doesn’t seem to be a procedure for dealing with derelict ships, and for a ship of nominal explorers, most of the crew show so little interest.  This could be easily explained if the crew needs to be ready to go at a moment’s notice after Picard’s meeting; Riker kinda tells us this, but they don’t do a very good job of showing us that the crew is on edge because of the meeting, and normally Riker would love to explore the derelict ship himself, but really they need to just report it and have the next vessel take a look at it.

  7. Randi Cohen Avatar

    Yes. I guess the “explore strange new planet theme” was too limiting.  Still, it is weird that nobody seems invested in it exploration generally except maybe Data.

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