1.19 — “Coming of Age”

1.19 — “Coming of Age”

Plot: Wesley Crusher takes the entrance exams for Starfleet Academy, just shy of his 16th birthday. Meanwhile, an Admiral friend of Picard’s shows up with an ominous assignment: to find something “wrong” with the Enterprise. Based on the crew interrogations undertaken by his junior officer, Remmick, it seems that the something wrong is Captain Picard! Also, a despondent young man hijacks a shuttlecraft.

Thoughts: I have mixed feelings about this episode. There’s a lot going on–A, B, and C plots. I don’t so much mind mixing up the form of the episodes, as long as they work. In this case, the cluttered plot strands provide effective distraction from the unusually poor acting from the guest performers. Time and again, I found myself thinking, “I would have asked that actor for a different line reading.” The Admiral and Lt. Remmick, in particular, just did not play their parts naturalistically.

In the midst of all the hamminess, a really great line reading can pop out and shine. Viz Picard: “This has been a strain on our friendship.” So understated, and honest. So much more impact than all the sawing of the air going on most of the time.

About Riker’s response to Remmick: petulant much? I was waiting for him to stomp his foot and stick out his tongue. They say that what’s interesting on screen is conflict. That may be true–at least Riker isn’t boring!–but he sure looks out of place, and unprofessional.

I wasn’t too taken with the callbacks made to previous episodes in the season, although this is almost a first for Star Trek. I did find myself reacting strongly, and positively, to the suggestion that they may be building forward continuity into the series. Someday, will we find more about this alleged conspiracy within Starfleet?

The episode has bearing on the long-term arc for Wesley, as well. I just can’t bring myself to be very interested in the character, however. His mother seems strangely standoffish, treating him almost as a stranger as he prepares to go off for his critical testing at the beginning of the episode. Doesn’t she have a point of view about this? Shouldn’t we know what it is?

About the Academy: it barely makes sense that Starfleet would be only willing to accept one student, despite having identified four exemplary candidates. I don’t see how you staff large starships that way (let alone the Academy itself). Were we supposed to understand that they are only taking one student from this sector, or something? That hardly makes sense, since the Enterprise moves around. Doesn’t Picard have any pull? I would think he would want his field-promoted bridge officer fully trained as soon as possible, for safety reasons, if for no other reason.

I don’t remember undergoing psychological testing, or having forced confrontations with my greatest fear, as part of my own college entrance exams. Are we expected to take this seriously? If we are, I would have to question the methodology, and probable disparate impacts of the process on different personality types and cultures. Finally, Wesley should not be telling everyone he “failed,” when the evaluation indicated he performed exceptionally well, just slightly less so than the top candidate. Are second place finishers all considered to be failures in our enlightened 24th century utopia?

I should probably be holding TNG to higher aesthetic standards, but my pass/fail grades for Season One are mostly based on whether the episode succeeded in entertaining me, without excessive aggravation. For me, the cluttered plot lines of “Coming of Age” did succeed in keeping the episode busy and interesting. *Grade:* Pass.

What did you think?

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5 responses to “1.19 — “Coming of Age””

  1. Randi Cohen Avatar

    Not bad!  The webbed fingers thing was cute and I enjoyed seeing the academy training/weed-out process, although honestly with the qualiity of current officers it is hard to imagine them all surviving it!

    (Although facing greatest fears is not currently a possible thing to test, I have heard about some pretty intense admissions processes for competitive residencies, i.e. reproduce this 3-dimensional figure drawn 2-dimensionally with pliers and a very stiff wire within 10 minutes while I ask you personal questions.  So it would not be that hard for me to buy something like that, but again hard to imagine current crew passing!). 

    Kind of a corny turn-about on the part of the inspector and I am really not sure I buy Picard as the best commander in the fleet.  Interesting stuff about a potential plot against the Federation.  

    Interesting point about Wesley’s loss of his father because Picard “made a choice”.  I am curious what the choice was exactly.

  2. Kevin Black Avatar

    They must take up the plot line about Jack Crusher eventually, right? Not sure how this will be affected by B.C. not being in season two.

  3. R. Alex Reutter Avatar

    Riker is so raw in season one.  He has no composure and is utterly discombobulated when not allowed into the little boys’ meeting with Picard and the Admiral and the Admiral’s… thing.  By contrast, Yar remains utterly professional, and Dr. Crusher actually smiles at Picard.  Nice moment to show their familiarity with each other.

    So… getting in to Starfleet is like getting in to the Ivies.  It’s a big crapshoot, and even if you have multiple exceptional candidates from the same region, quotas screw you.

    I’m cute!  She said I’m cuuuuuuute!!! I think Wesley’s nose is about to glow bright red and he’ll fly off like a good little reindeer.

    Riker stepped over the back of the chair!  (have you seen the video of every instance in which Riker steps over the back of a chair?)  I don’t understand why everyone is so belligerent here.  Remmick and Riker are both totally unprofessional.  Why is Deanna flustered?  She’s the ship’s counselor.

    Lost the thread of the episode while going through e-mail.  So Picard is being offered the role of head of Starfleet Academy.  That’s nice, but we need him here; he’s our Alec Guinness!

    Wesley’s psych exam looks like something from the Kobayashi Maru playbook.  

    I remember being annoyed by most Wesley episodes.  This is a good one, because he simply has to be a very bright teenager and not an uberwunderkind.

    Patrick Stewart is so good.  A real find for this show.

  4. Randi Cohen Avatar

    I agree, I also found Wesley less annoying in this episode, possibly for that reason.

  5. R. Alex Reutter Avatar

    Also… thinking about Picard as “best commander in the fleet”, I guess that depends upon your definition of “best”.  That’s like choosing the best military commander in WWII, everyone has their own strengths and weaknesses.  Still, one would hope that the captain of the flagship is one of the best commanders in the fleet.  Then again, I would expect there to be a suitable admiral to take over Starfleet.

    Ultimately, a lot of the problems with this episode are due to the fact that we don’t have a good idea of the size of Starfleet as an organization, relative to the scale of the Federation as a whole, and to Starfleet Academy.  

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