1.17 — “When the Bough Breaks”

1.17 — “When the Bough Breaks”

Plot: The legendary planet of Aldea (legendary to whom?) is the setting for this week’s adventure. The Enterprise gets there by following energy patterns like a trail of breadcrumbs–or are they notes from the Pied Piper?–because thar be children thieves on this planet. David Bowie’s Goblin King does not make an appearance (spoiler).

Thoughts:  This is an odd-feeling episode. They seem to be borrowing tropes from the fantasy genre at the beginning. Then Troi says “I sense thousands of minds, very close,” and I think, close in an interstellar sense? You’re (at best) still tens of thousands of kilometers away from the surface of the planet, right?

The Aldeans… just seem a little cheap to me. There is no effort made to make them seem alien in their appearance, clothes, custom, or manner. They just look like more upper-middle-class white people. The whole planet seems to consist of three indoor rooms.

I like that they make it seem like our custom of having parents be so possessive and attached to their children is deviant, and selfish. Picard sputters indignantly, searching for words to justify our narrowmindedness. I don’t see how the seven or so child actors that the show could afford to have (two of whom were Wil Wheaton’s younger siblings) would have been able to easily repopulate the planet. They skirt right past the ugly mechanics of that issue.

I was afraid that the episode would end with the children teaching the Aldeans that they can’t force children to love them, and that they should collectively suicide as a species, rather than be such big meanies. Instead, we have Dr. Crusher easily solve the planet’s population problem, despite the fact that the Aldeans are supposed to be vastly more scientifically advanced. So–we get an unrealistic, oversimplified pat ending, but not the treacly, oversentimental ending I was dreading. Small win.

There was that really cool model shot of the computer, however. I suddenly felt like I wasn’t watching Trek anymore. They really stretched the aesthetic of the show. More of that, please.

Someone quoted on Wikipedia says that this episode is chock full of cliches. Well, that’s true. Specifically, I seem to recall a lot of recent stories that involve utopian societies controlled by benevolent computers that somehow mess everything up (“11001001,” “Justice”). But, this was basically an entertaining episode, that held my attention, although the pace gets a little slow. Grade: Pass.

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3 responses to “1.17 — “When the Bough Breaks””

  1. Randi Cohen Avatar

    Surprisingly, I liked this episode and found it genuinely gripping, although as a parent, it was fairly painful to watch.  Krusher is surprisingly rational – maybe she is getting used to having Wesley imperiled at every turn?  Also, it is rather surprising that the children took as long as they did to get home-sick, I’m not sure if whomever wrote this was really that familiar with children.

    Overall, I liked that nobody was evil (just completely clueless about both people and science… kind of amazing although we’ve seen the concept before). Nice that there could be a happy ending for everyone.  It was contrived, but I’ve seen worse contrivances.  

    I am still not a particular fan of the dialogue or characters on the series at this point, but the kids were pretty neat and the moment when Harry’s dad is agonizing over having his last words be angry ones was poignant.

    This episode bears some resemblance to “Wink of an Eye” (radiation poisoning, sterility, stealing folks from other races to try to compensate), but in “Wink of an Eye” the Scalosians do not get a happy ending.  Much like in “Wink of an Eye”, I find myself wondering why none of these aliens can just go ahead and ask for help when they get in a jam.  

    BTW, check out recent study on phthalates lowering children’s IQ (although the concept of us poisoning our children is nothing new, this is the latest wrinkle).  So, this potentially could have been a great and very relevant episode… have the aliens’ governing body be in complete denial about techno-poisoning of the environment being behind the wave of sterility and want to kidnap Enterprise children or whatever, and add a ragtag bunch of feisty environmental scientists who are trying to spread the truth that sterility is from the planet’s own technology and are being hunted down.  Picard rescues the kids but has to choose between watching a race assure its own destruction and intervening in planetary politics against starfleet policy because let’s say this planet is critical to some major trade agreements (let’s not have this nonsense about prime directive since this is a post-warp culture).   And let’s say he comes up with some awesome solution, like transport the scientists and their supporters to an unoccupied nearby planet to remake their society (let’s say the genetic damage is reversible for the majority given enough time away from the chemicals).  The race can live on but the scientists have to leave their loved ones behind who don’t believe them or who can’t make the adjustment, with great tearfulness, and are looking forward to seeing their home planet in ruins within a generation.  Now that would be an episode that would be relevant and that I would want to watch! 

  2. Kevin Black Avatar

    I want to see Randi’s episode! I imagine it’s hopeless to think the people in charge of new Star Trek III would take on such a complex, nuanced plotline.

    I was also thinking back to TOS since Cory Lea reminded us yesterday about “The Mark of Gideon”–the planet which has a severe overpopulation problem because the culture lacks the ability to be sterile. Clearly Gideon and Aldea need to get together–maybe the parents of Gideon would even be willing to give up some surplus children!

  3. Randi Cohen Avatar

    Yes, I was thinking this as well! In STTOS, as below par as Mark Of Gideon was, it was trying to be about a larger social issue. Whereas Bough Breaks was not. This is why I would rather watch a bad STTOS episode than a better than average STTNG one. At least so far. I hope it changes in Season 2. How could the STTNG writers miss the one thing about the Star Trek concept that made it more than just another sci fi TV show?

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