1.9 — “The Battle”

1.9 — “The Battle”

Plot: The Enterprise is summoned by Starfleet to a rendezvous with a Ferengi vessel. The Ferengi (who recently were so secretive that Starfleet didn’t know what they looked like, and had never seen one of their ships) requested the meeting and insist that it be face-to-face, even offering to beam Picard aboard their ship. That would have required too much set construction, however, so the Ferengi beam aboard the Enterprise instead (even skipping the transporter room–one less set to light!). The Ferengi captain wants to give Picard a present–the remains of the U.S.S. Stargazer, his first starship command, which he had to abandon nine years earlier, following a space battle. What could go wrong? Well, one of the Ferengi bears a grudge stemming from the aforementioned battle, and has a glowing red orb, which produces strange effects on the Captain’s mind.

Thoughts: It’s tempting to grade this on a curve. Hey, it’s not as bad as the last Ferengi episode! There’s only one leering comment about how unbelievable it is that the men allow the women to wear clothes.

The episode is clumsy, however. “So-and-so has a grudge against the Captain, and tries to get revenge using a secret mind control device” is a pretty rudimentary plot. Nothing quite so crude ever got to the screen in TOS, even in third season. 

It’s interesting to explore PIcard’s past, but the way it is depicted mostly seems like a wasted opportunity. I kept thinking, “this would have been done so much better in Babylon 5!” 

We learn that when Picard was younger, he was a decisive, brilliant captain who did everything right. The catastrophic loss of a starship, followed by rescue from a shuttlecraft only nine years ago, sounds like it should be a big deal, and a black mark on Picard’s record. Instead, we’re told that Picard hasn’t thought about the incident in years. If he doesn’t care, why should we?

The continuity-straining Ferengi attack against the Stargazer that started the battle (9 years before the Federation’s official first contact with the Ferengi) is allowed to remain senseless and unexplained. If it was just a random act of piracy, why is Captain Bok so offended that the Stargazer acted in self defense? How does Bok find out who the Stargazer’s Captain was, let alone track his career? There’s no larger story arc here–the premiere of Babylon 5, which forever changed the expectations for continuity in televised science fiction, was still more than 6 years in the future.

Meanwhile, the drama is flat, the mind control device is a cheap, tacky prop, and, as Wil Wheaton observes in his review in Memories of the Future, Volume One, the audience is always several steps ahead of what is happening on screen. Picard is still indecisive, and irresponsibly unconcerned about his own health. The episode only succeeds when it relies on Patrick Stewart’s considerable charisma. Stewart, Brent Spiner, and Levar Burton always seem to be worth watching, even when the script is bad. Grade: Fail.

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7 responses to “1.9 — “The Battle””

  1. Randi Cohen Avatar

    Excellent points, Kev!  Still, I am grading on a curve, just for the sake of finding something to finally not be horrified by in this series so far.

    Notable non-negative aspects of the episode:  Nobody is forced to act like a caricature of themselves and none of the actors are wince-worthy in their performances.  There is an actual single plot thread which continues throughout the episode and some suspense (although if indeed the maneuver is down in the manuals then I would assume somebody at some point would have thought up the counter-maneuver, but whatevs, at least the person whose life is at risk is someone I care about, unlike the prior episode).  Data and the Ferengi are much improved as compared to earlier depictions of them.

    Also, nice to also know that at some point Picard was a daring fighter… maybe those days can return sometime.  They feel pretty disconnected from his actions now.

    I liked the commentary on modern pain medicine as “trickery”… unfortunately all too true.

    This episode was OK, I would go so far as to say that it is the first episode that I have not disliked  Although to say that I would watch it voluntarily outside of the context of this re-watch would be an overstatement.  

    My viewing of the series so far has made clear to me that if you don’t respect your characters (any of your characters), it makes for rather unpleasant viewing.  And not disrespecting is the first step toward respecting, so I will hope we have gotten through the lowest point and it will be upward from here…

    (And it seems to me given how frequently crew brainwave patterns get messed with, maybe they need to have some kind of futuristic brainwave check prior to reporting for duty… like fingerprinting only more psychological.  Since Krusher mentions they’ve mapped out all the brainwave patterns and everything.  Somebody needs to get to work on this.)

  2. Randi Cohen Avatar

    Kev, I do think turnabout intruder of tos had nearly the same plot as this episode, plus for better motive for the revenge seeker and a slightly cooler device, but minus for ridiculous rampant sexism. So, TOS 3rd season bad episode is nearly as bad as TNG 1st season good episode. It is a miracle the ratings held up long enough for TNG to reach season 2! Thanks Trek fans for supporting TNG through the rough start…

  3. Kevin Black Avatar

    Turnabout Intruder had two characters (of different gender) switching bodies, and the officer court martial against Kirk/Janice Lester, and the subplot with Lester’s assistant who gets drawn into her murderous intrigues and battles with his conscience (didn’t she also kill off the rest of the research scientists?)… so, while it had problems, it was more complex.

  4. Kevin Black Avatar

    I do find that the characters are growing on me… even Riker. They managed to put together a pretty good ensemble of people with different looks and personalities that inhabit the screen well together. I just have to get over the lack of naturalism. TNG doesn’t nail the illusion of a real working military vessel like TOS does–the crew functions more like sitcom characters, where you have to just accept the conceit that these odd people hang out together all the time and don’t seem to have any outside worries, or anywhere else to go. Friends was a great show, but they didn’t depend on a naturalistic depiction of what it is like to be young and have neighbors….

  5. sunny jim Avatar

    I think I’m mostly with Kevin on this one.  It bugs me that we go from “We’ve never seen Ferengi, only heard about them” to “Except that time that one of our main characters had an important space battle with them.” 

    I like that we see a little bit more of Picard’s history, and character (it’s nice that there’s a Picard Maneuver even – gives him some street cred…), but there’s just so many holes. 

  6. Randi Cohen Avatar

    Good point!  More lack of continuity…

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